Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
In modern days, people prefer to wear branded outfits, ride popular vehicles and own many other tagged items. The prime causes of this growing trend appear to be the pressure of maintaining social status and the impact of advertisements. In my belief, this is regarded as a contradictory trend for myriads of reasons.
Of all the numerous components which lead to this transition, one is the social status. This is because, in a world of technology and globalization, people tend to compete with one another in terms of fashion and modern appliances. Not to mention, these accomplices have become a symbol of modernity and prosperity. If someone is wearing non-branded clothes and do not own any high-tech piece of equipment, he\she would consider being either impoverished or illiterate. Another significant reason for this inclination is celebrity endorsements as the contemporary youths are highly impressionable and often viewed stalking their favourite public figures' lifestyle, so for instance, whatever is being promoted by these actors, people would buy those items without giving any second thought.
However, I believe that this trend has manifold untoward repercussions. The reason for this that people often end up spending far more than what they earn. This results in undesirable debt and other financial crises. An escalating number of credit card and loan defaulters, these days, is the consequence of this shift in the buying habits of people. Moreover, local markets are vanishing, as branded outfits and other accessories are only available with high-end supermarkets.
In conclusion, two of the main elements of this shift in the shopping pattern of people are community aspects and the influence of celebrity commercialization. I feel that this has negatively reshaped the spending habits of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
... outfits, ride popular vehicles and own many other tagged items. The prime causes of this ...
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Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'figures'' or 'figure's'?
Suggestion: figures'; figure's
... viewed stalking their favourite public figures lifestyle, so for instance, whatever is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06483947332 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6573326269 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261853831721 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762850591825 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432462014743 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146859386311 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316203856809 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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