1. As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I disagree with the statement that the ability of human to think for themselves will be certainly degraded because people depends more on technology to solve with the problems.
More advanced technology we rely on is not a mechanism to attenuate people’s abilities to think, but being an impetus for human to keep evolution and people actually think more complicated problems than it was before. because there are lots of newly encountered problems occurring every day since industrialization evolution. For example, we are on the era where mobile phone transmission speed migrates from 4G to 5G, the internet transfer speed of mobile will increase considerably than it was before and it also engenders a lot of protocol and technical problems to solve and the complexity goes so higher than it was before industrialization. In contrast, before the time, there are not so many problems requiring experts to solve and people living was much more simple at that time. Therefore, by industrialization, the technology does not become a fence to restrain people’s thinking, but a stimulus to push people thinking further and that’s the source to drive human civilization to evolve.
The opponents may argue that the technology would make some people lazy because tech replace many routine jobs with automation procedure. people are likely to become more rely on technology, rather than do by themselves. For example, by widespread internet accessibility, people receive overwhelming information from anywhere rife with useful and useless information. And because it’s so easily to get information from internet, some people are just absorb all information from online without digestion and further thinking. Thus, it create an illusion that people don’t think by the convenience provided by technology. However, the phenomenon would not be a factor that make people think less, but a presentation that technology has been successfully making people’s lives more convenient. because ordinary people are generally not responding for thinking to solve the issues in neither this era nor old days, they just benefit the convenience by technology evolved.
Additionally, there are more people thinking than before industrialization. because the number of problems we currently facing has increased tremendously and more than it was. For example, before industrialization, people in taiwan were mostly working as farmers with simple life. there were not many questions and problems to solve at that time. The only problem they were considering is how to improve the amount of the harvest every season. On the other hand, today, taiwan has been a nation famous of technology business. For instance, TSMC (taiwan Semi-Conductor Manufacturing) has become the greatest semiconductor producer in the world. there are more than 10 thousands staffs working in the company and thinking how to solve the technical problems every working day. it involves so many experts thinking about how to solve the technical issues, hence the technology makes more people thinking as the example mentioned above.
In conclusion, the technologies invented by human would be a stimulus to keep people think further and create more issues leaving to solve and the fact that people more rely on technology is just the convenient consequence boosted by technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2824.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 521.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42034548944 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07212072306 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46641074856 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7310535852 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.782608696 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.652173913 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344069694126 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113793227264 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903124945316 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255009246901 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08317116544 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.