Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer countries. However, the governments of richer countries take more responsibility of helping the take more responsibility for helping poorer nations in such aeras.
In today’s world, some underdeveloped countries are still fighting for basic needs, hunger, educations poverty, uncured diseases and many more. Developed nations should make a contribution by providing better educations facilities, healthcare and expanding businesses which help to grow fast and more efficient. The productive solutions are described in further ensuring paragraphs.
Education and health fields are interconnected with each other. If the level of education is high, which means the better the healthcare system. There are many solutions, that how the richer continent can support the less rich nations in such fields. Firstly, economically well countries can establish schools and provide free education with facilities like computers, books and many more which helps to encourage students towards education. Moreover, developed countries make liberalization on the student-visa process so a student can get admission in their famous colleges and universities.
Secondly, in the field of the medical sector, the developed countries can help in many ways. By constructing hospitals with modern equipment and modern drugs to the poorer countries. In addition, they can send the experts in those nations and start free campaigns on a healthy lifestyle, serious diseases and many more which can reduce the mortality rate due to lack of medical services.
Finally, business is crucial for any country to expand more. Well-being countries should help to improve in the economy of poorer nations. This can be done by putting low customs tax duty on less developed countries. In addition, rich nations should establish their companies in those nations, which helps to create more employment and can lift out of poverty.
In conclusion, we should always help others. Therefore, rich countries should help poor countries so they can stand with the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61971830986 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88531362513 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9956929485 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296603736921 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996313180837 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638458926449 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176982993945 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443181450437 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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