It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
The more socialized you are in this generation you can be the identified very easily.I partially agree in toto with the speaker we as a human beings are striving to define ourselves.Let's discuss views which can be stated with examples to define the issue more clearly with a better view.
Firstly,The innovation of technology is rather one of the important one which is making us to be in the limelight like such as,If a person goes to a date he uploads in any social media,In the same way if one them buy a car they first let people to know.Basically,everyone needs attention in any way that they are doing all sort of good things in life or progressing in life,In a survey taken in india proved that 90 percent of people travel not to enjoy their vacation but to let people know by consciously updating on social groups.
In addition to that,Although in some people it is necessary to show who they are like for example,a politician should be known to people he needs to interact with people that's when he would win as a leader.Even a family strive to earn lot of money and have good name in the society that's when they are noticed.People sometimes also hate attending any parties as everyone starts asking about career choices,goals they don't wish to show their identity.
Secondly,The most annoying thing is people start judging you with the type of people you go out with and the lifestyle you have.This rather makes us to be in disguise.it is nevertheless,the thinking of one's own perspective to be changed.Take an example if a person who is drunk behaves very abnormal in a party get a very bad impression which affects his identity.The celebrities do often do in charity works or just to meet people who in turn is showing gratitude towards the love people show on them.While some do not wish to represent their life outside and only doing their job.
In a nutshell,Although it is one of the main reason to have your identity is basically by social groups it rather depends on individual thoughts and interests to come out of the box and represent themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, sort of, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71978021978 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99103034566 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 23.0359550562 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.272328103 60.3974514979 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.6 118.986275619 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.8 23.4991977007 310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6 5.21951772744 510% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995986856843 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654591010951 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570169459092 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654591010951 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570169459092 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 14.1392134831 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 48.8420337079 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.2143820225 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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