All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
right now, in the age of information and technology, education is the utmost thing required for the development of a country. if more students get the chance to explore the opportunities of higher studies, they will be able to expertise in their own field of interest and lead that to their excellence. it is not only beneficial for the individual, but for the country as well. Of course, a proper university-level education requires a lot of infrastructure, effort, good professors and management. if the government struggles to arrange funds for these on its own, that is the weakness of the government that it is not able to provide the required environment for development.
Offering free university education to students is nothing but a good investment for the future.
but right now, in most of the universities, the procedure is not the same. it mainly consists of two categories; one for students who can pay, another one is for the students for whom the university thinks that he/she can be provided scholarship as he/she is a scholar student. this system has its own flaws. The selection of the students for scholarship is not a perfect unbiased process as student can definitely never be judged only by his/her grades, summer projects, and some examination results. Though right now the process is well generalised, still it is only capable of selecting some students who are good and capable, not all of them.
now, just like always money and power get preferences, rich students can easily get the opportunitiy for higher studies. Their funding is surely help the university to grow further. but it also creates discrimination among students. they are the key reason that lotsof bright student are not able to enter the universities, so the overall performance of the institute goes down. it is not only the money that is important, but the hard work and talent of the students are also the key features which drive forward the education, research and development. so instead of prefering the rich students, they can only focus on the quality of student.government can arrange for the funding by putting more taxes on the reach people. this can help in overall development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00819672131 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02208148463 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489071038251 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5192513286 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113321163866 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353506777238 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343650667526 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784666150811 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313048497698 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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