Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People think that one of the most necessary invention the world in hundred previous years is computer , causing some public controversy. Personally, I partly agree with this assertion
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why computers are the most important invention. Firstly, computers help people boost their knowledge about various aspects life. My cousin, for example, knows a lot of about digital gadget such as smartphone, Ipad because he often reads many articial or information about technology. In addition to this , computers create favourable conditions for people to make a new friend, find a long-lost friend or connect people who are living from each other. This give them a chance to strengthen relationship
On the other hand , I believe that computers have an severe impact on face to physical interaction. As can be seen that the frequent use of computer can lead to a situation which people avoid talking to each other. The reason is that they prefer to spend time on computer instead of spending time on each other, in other word, they want to be alone in room with their computers. Many today’ s youngsters do not seem to have time for social activities because mos of their time are spent on surfing the net on computers. This results in lack of confidence when they interact face-to-face
In conclusion, while the power of computer is undeniable in hundred years ago , I belive that the appearance of computer also bring several detrimental impacts for people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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...ld in hundred previous years is computer , causing some public controversy. Person...
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Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
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Suggestion: ,
...on about technology. In addition to this , computers create favourable conditions...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02008032129 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72023494762 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1530330881 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185426138853 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743212464026 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399410405276 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119771270251 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332815761416 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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