Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many people believe that man and women was born with different characteristics and this determind the job which is classified to them. Although, there are many strong argument opposed in the past. I completely disagree with this statement that applying this to world of job nowadays.
On the one hand, man and women have their own characteristics and personal interest that affect to their job they chose later. In terms of phycical strength, when almost the situation that people do by hand, while women not to have a streng power to do these, it is undeniable the less of consequence of social development such urban areas. Another reason that, they are not to have an great opportunities to qualified as an plumber, electrician, car mechanic, etc... because of requirement of good heath. In term of pattern of gender characteristics imposed on the human as a whole, women are prioritized to play with their newborn and housework, an even take care for the retirement of elderly.
On the other hand, workplace are changed too much, i believe old argument are no longer socially acceptable. One reason for that, both gender should be have equal opportunities to do whatever they want. The quality of education has been changed rapidly in modern society, the qualification give equally to people, if they do hard to achieve and pursue their careers, it will be worth for people to have a dream job. Another reason is that it was easily to break barrier which has been survive over few decades that an obvious benefit to women do all the job depend on their dream. By job market are necessary to society, people should help to fulfill their potential, such an flight attendance, cook, and variety of work.
In conclusion, despite of some obvious disadvantages of gender characteristics on the sustainable and eco-social development later, all these advantage should be considered. Some people should be qualify as an essential manual worker such an plumber, electrician to ensure the quality of each family as well as community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97376093294 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86232053018 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536443148688 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1980964668 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224898747892 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688702002453 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442518775212 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128743059672 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203717463269 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.