As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? How problems might be solved?
It is true that these days, abundance of metropolises are on the rise nationwide, which correlates with a number of issues. My essay will shed lights on both negative effects of this phenomenon on youngsters and possible solutions.
The young might confront heaps of adverse effects due to the growth of urban areas. First, there is likelihood that because of this trend young people would encounter the impediments to secure jobs. As the more flourishing a city is, the more it will attracts well-qualified job-seekers from different areas. Therefore, young city dwellers’ like fresh graduates will face a great disadvantage in term of employability. Second, this tendency is often associated with the fact that the youth might be lacking of parental care. Parents residing in growing metropolises have to face numerous municipal problems such as traffic congestion, competitiveness at workplace, etc. Thus, to satisfy the requirements of the occupations and avoid traffic jam they are forced to leave home earlier and spend more time to work which makes them have less time with their children. For example, my sister who lives in Hanoi has to spend at least 2 hours a day to reach her company on time instead of sparing that amount of time for her little son.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve the problem. First, the government can consider providing intensive vocational training for young people so that they are well-equipped with knowledge and skills to get a suitable job and earn a stable income. Second, another potential method maybe that companies organize events with employees and their children participation to help strengthen their family bond. Finally, to mitigate traffic jam, the state authorities can take into account upgrading cities’ road system to reduce pressure of arriving at work timely for parents.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various problems for youngsters who are living in the cities, and steps need to be taken to combat this issues.
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- Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- As major cities in the world are growing today so do their problems What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth How problems might be solved 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...flourishing a city is, the more it will attracts well-qualified job-seekers from differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18597560976 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81420605602 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612804878049 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1014619587 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24059046176 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709268311348 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540859601913 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134476460914 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777984462794 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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