existence of other habitat planets
The lecture and the article considers the issue if any other habitat planets exist.
Firstly, the professor has stated a lecture with an illustration of a lake full of fishes located far away in a forest. Like those fishes, which have never seen another lake, people delay the existence of another habitat planet. This directly refutes the argument from the passage which assers that aliens are a product of imagination.
Secondly, the professor points out that even in our Milky Way galaxy there are four hundred billions of stars. Our star the Sun has only one habitat planet around named the Earth. Furthermore, even if other planets don't have ideal conditions it is still appropriate for dwellers. The nature gives different skills to different species to survive in various conditions. This contradicts the position of the writer. He tells that all stars are very different from our star and live around impossible.
Thirdly, the article develops the idea if there are any aliens in the galaxy they should respond to signals sanding by people to space. The lecturer challenges the concept by the opinion that aliens could have no interest to communicate with us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'hundred billion'.
Suggestion: hundred billion
... in our Milky Way galaxy there are four hundred billions of stars. Our star the Sun has only one ha...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rth. Furthermore, even if other planets dont have ideal conditions it is still appro...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'signal'.
Suggestion: signal
...ns in the galaxy they should respond to signals sanding by people to space. The lecture...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 194.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05670103093 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50051009782 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3325892739 49.2860985944 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.75 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27485855857 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958260363133 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159616945183 0.0662205650399 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205513396305 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199981587538 0.0443174109184 451% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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