People are getting over-dependent on the internet and phones.
Is it a positive or negative development?
It is not an exaggeration to say that modern life is highly cohesive with technology. In my opinion, over-dependent on anything can be detrimental and therefore moderate use should be encouraged. However, let us further analyse the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
Advantages of the internet are countless. Mobile phones and devices have brought the internet to the fingertips of people. For instance, the increasing popularity of mobile apps has made everyday tasks more convenience while providing great satisfaction to the user. Moreover, productivity and effectiveness of work have been increased in every sector advancing economies and overall life quality globally. To elaborate, if we consider the healthcare sector and the agricultural sector, we can understand how the internet has changed people's lives. Surgeries are been conducted online and anybody can order organic food which the love from a distant country just by using their handphone. If the internet was not there, these things would be just science fictions.
However, extreme addiction to the internet and mobile devices can cause adverse medical problems. Lack of physical exercise and concomitant obesity is one of the prime issues. Individual's addiction to the mobile screen has isolated them from society and consequently, mental issues such as depression are getting increased. In fact, as many researchers have already suggested, children's addiction to the internet and mobile devices can detrimentally effect on their education and health.
Admittedly, the internet is one of the best resources for education and it is vital for modern schools. Therefore, educating children to use it properly should have the utmost priority.
To recapitulate, in spite of the plethora of advantages which the internet and mobile phones provide, people should use them in moderation and more consciously to get the maximum outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55821917808 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98684133299 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3236084149 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168556000998 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502177923174 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540448357979 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911068118854 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521868933149 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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