It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
In recent years, the raise of juvenile delinquency has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this problem is attributed to by a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be adopted to tackle it.
Some causes can be cited to explain for the emergence of this issue. First, since the majority of current adolescents have an excessive exposure to questionable contents, they are inclined to become would-be delinquents. In fact, prevalent video games and films are violent, and they spread the message the more you kill, the stronger you are, which galvanizes the aggression of young people and makes them have the tendency to solve all their conflicts by violence. Second, by targeting young generation, drug dealers also contribute to making vulnerable young people engage in illegal activities. Plenty of evidences have shown that drugs can easily make human addicted to it and lose the control of themselves, so addicts will do everything even commit crimes to obtain money in order to support their drug use, especially young people who are pushover.
However, this trend can be effectively solved by a number of feasible solutions. First, since violence in media can be considered major contributor to the increasing youth crime, the government should manage more stringently contents on the media, which will help adolescents not be excessively exposed to the violent scenes. In fact that, if questionable contents are replaced with inspirational ones, the media can help nature morality’s young people. Second, imposing strict and severe sanctions on drug trafficking plays an integral role in tacking the crimes. This means that, if drug dealers as well as buyers are sentenced lifetime imprisonment, other would be delinquents will have the fear of being punished, which acts as a deterrent for would-be criminals.
In conclusion, the rampancy of violent violence in the media and drug industry are the main culprits for the growth of juvenile delinquency. By enforcing laws, the police can alleviate problem to a controllable level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 839, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29393939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84285226473 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.474198756 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.785714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263592981523 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860120149331 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546364200372 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159334809184 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281298417854 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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