In your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them ?
Some parents plead that they should choose the jobs of their children, on the other hand, teenagers are thinking that they are the ones who should be doing this. In my opinion, I think anyone should choose what he or she will do in the future but at the same time along with the parents’ advices. In this essay we will discuss this point of view in more details.
Nowadays, young people are more independent and it is their own right to select their jobs in future. Although, they may select to be self-employed or to study for higher degrees and then work as employee in any firm, but, it should be their choice. To put It differently, anyone must feel that he is satisfied with his job and that this is his life career to be able to provide his highest performance. Also, by doing so our self-confidence will be maximized.
Consequently, the parents should not thwart the children from selecting their path, even if, they have another views; however, fathers and mothers can provide their own advices to the young generations that are based on their life experience. Furthermore, elders can act as a guide way for the young and teach them about the consequences of their choices. For example, if a teenager is going to work just after he ends his studies in the high school, yet, the parents might think that he could continue to study in the university, in this case, the father as well as the mother should have a direct discussion with the son so they could explain their point of view, yet, they cannot force him.
According to the above analysis, teenagers have the right to choose their future; Nonetheless, the parents should be able to understand that at this point they may only provide contributions and advices and that their role is only limited to this without forcing the children to any particular choices against their will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is their own right to select their jobs in future. Although, they may select to be self-e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, well, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66871165644 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51628741599 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4216020412 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36307216972 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144009105223 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986291348688 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228878542972 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428188033588 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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