TPO 6. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Nowadays people enjoy and have access to a variety of goods that might make their lives more comfortable than our gardparents had in the past. It is thought by some that our grantparents had a good life compare to ourlives today. This essay will discuss why in fact, our lives are easier today than our's grandparents lives.
To begin with, with the development of technology people have changed completely the way they live their lives. They have invented tools that are useful and efficient, which makes everybody's life comfortable. For instance, the improvement of transportation is an obvious development that shows why people's lives are different and easier than people's in the past. In addition, these services are affordable by everyone. On the other hand, in the past our grandparents did not have access to the most of these utilities because they could not afforded. If the transportation would have been available to all past generations, then they would have had easy lives as we have today.
Secondly, People today have learned from mistakes that are made from people in the past, so that have helped them to find a new easy ways to deal with complex problems, and have an answer for a variety of similare things that might happen in the furure. This would make peoples lives easier and rais awarenes in the way they would behave. For example, a couple of days ago, I read an article in a newspaper, which mentioned a recent research held by University of Totonto. This research indicated that any generation in the past have always shared their experiences and have tried to improve and make things easy for the foreseeable future, the results of that are clearly seen to the easy and convinient life that everyone has today. If our grandparents would not have worked hard to improve things for the next generation, then we might not ever had an easy life.
To sum up, our lives are easy today than our's grandparents were in the past. This is because we are living in a time where the technology is advanced and people today have learned and do not repeat the same mistakes made by our grandparents. Thus, we have gained knowledge from them and based on that knowledge we have made our lives easy in any aspect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay. This essay will discuss why in fact, our lives are easier today than ours gr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...why in fact, our lives are easier today than ours grandparents lives. To beg...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'afford'
Suggestion: afford
... these utilities because they could not afforded. If the transportation would have been ...
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Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...uld not afforded. If the transportation would have been available to all past generations, then...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...hat have helped them to find a new easy ways to deal with complex problems, and have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and rais awarenes in the way they would behave. For example, a couple of days ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77260981912 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5830696073 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454780361757 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0967350901 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.647058824 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116448514818 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505286576058 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395142848527 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898420378897 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341643635463 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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