You work in an international company. Write a letter to the manager to give you some time off, in your letter include the following :
The reason why you need time off
When you need time off
Who should replace you when you are not around
Dear Sir,
My name is Bhontu Kumari and I work as an Early Childhood Educator in your prestigious institution. I am writing this letter to request you to grant me some time off from work.
I need time off to take care of my work of my daughter because she met an accident at her daycare. She has to undergo a knee surgery immediately. She is on complete bedrest for a month. I am a single parent so my daughter is completely dependent on me as there is no one else who could take care of her.
I will have to take leave from tomorrow as I have to be there with my daughter during her surgery. And, I will not be able to return to work until one month because I will have to assist my daughter at home. So, I will be unable to work from April 1, 2020 to April 30, 2020.
I have requested a the supply assistant Mr. Chintu Shekhar to cover my shifts during my absence and he has agreed to my request. Also, I have forwarded all the important work related documents to Mr. Shekhar already.
I hope you will understand the urgency of my request and will reply with a positive response. I apologise for the inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Bhondu Kumari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Bhontu Kumari and I work as a...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith my daughter during her surgery. And, I will not be able to return to work unt...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... to April 30, 2020. I have requested a the supply assistant Mr. Chintu Shekhar to ...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt work related documents to Mr. Shekhar already. I hope you will understand ...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...convenience caused. Yours sincerely, Bhondu Kumari
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34545454545 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52499897717 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8415966129 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1474566998 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549176372541 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100288482905 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100185353499 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108471376962 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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