Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
It is thought by few that while purchasing any commodity the only thing which affects the decision to buy is the price. I do not agree with notion and believe that along with price there are many other factors which plays the relevant role while making the buying decision.
To begin with, undoubtedly money is the predominant factor while buying anything because nobody wants to waste their hard earned money on the products which are not essential or can be brought at less price during special discount or offers. Many a time people who spend the money extravagantly on the products and services which are of no use and they have to face the repercussion in later life when they have no saving left for the time when it will be really required. Prudence usually save a lot of money by making wise decision , for example, the product which is sold at high price when it newly launched after few days same is offered at 50 percent discount or some time local products of same quality is available at much less price. Therefore, by considering price before purchasing the product can fulfil the same requirement by spending less and people can save money for the future.
Moving further, there are products and service which have to purchase without giving a second thought or the thinking about price. If any person is in urgent requirement of the some medical treatment or equipment of medical use then it has be brought at any price, because health is the biggest wealth. A healthy person can earn the wealth at any time so price is not to be considered at that time. Apart from this emotions also plays the vital role while spending money. For instance, when children ask parents to fulfill their demand of particular product, they will try their best to get that for the child all because of emotion and affection for loved ones. Many things in life are brought just because of emotion and love, and cost of the thing is not a relevant factor at that time.
In conclusion, unequivocally it is human nature to think about the cost before making buying decision, but it is irrefutable that emotion, love and need of the time also plays the prominent role. Along with money other factors also influence the mind of the person when they choose the product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70854271357 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.349519463 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484924623116 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7930812831 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152744940003 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617672904235 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522031289149 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11250127747 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666983773969 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.