Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Excusing criminals is an issue that frequently generates a heated debate with supporters remaining that it is vital to punish violent criminals, whilst opponents claim that it is unacceptable in current society. There are both liabilities and utilities to this as will be explained. This essay will argue that capital punishment is essential and that it helps to keep security efficient in the society. This essay will highlight criminal deterrence as the biggest advantage of this, followed by an analysis of how sometimes it encourages revenge.
Carefully scrutiny of the subject reveals that it is possessed with unmistakable merit and the primary of which is capital punishment could stop violent criminals from committing crimes. The rationale behind this is that the fear of death might deter them and hence, would make the public feel protected as this shows that crime is not tolerated. A recent survey by Cambridge University found that the violent crime rates in countries that allow capital punishment are noticeable lower than other nations who do not.
It is an inevitable realization that the disadvantage is not exclusive of the foregoing but also extends to promoting revenge among people. A logical justification for this is parents believe that children could be easily influenced by this and treat people that they do not like badly. The Times recently reported that in 2018, 106 countries had abolished the death penalty in law for all crimes.
Overall, it plays an essential role in maintaining a safe society. This borne by the fact that most people feel safer when they are fully aware that crime is not tolerated in their countries rather than considering it as a contributing factor to a violent culture. According to the PEW Center, 67% of Vietnamese people agreed that the death penalty is necessary.
Subsequently weighing all the aforementioned, it can be safely stated the effect of the death penalty in tackling crimes is clear and although some might see it as a reason that makes society increasingly violent, it should be legal.
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...creasingly violent, it should be legal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1329305136 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74712577285 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7434543208 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260777720964 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794334854449 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608892796565 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142102398929 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492212445558 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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