Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
In the day and age, there is an increase in the number of convicts who cannot reintegrate into society and regularly commit crimes right after completely serving their sentence. This phenomenon resulted from several causes and actions should be taken by both the government and the whole society
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for the backslide of offenders. First and foremost, there is a prejudice about ex-convict among their surrounding inhabitation. It seems to be shreds of evidence that people do not want a former prisoner to become their neighbour and often treat them with a suspicious attitude and gossips. Furthermore, some ex-offenders also being discriminated by their spouse and children. An illustration of this is that the divorce rate among convict, especially the long-term imprisonment ones, is notably high. It is the underlying reasons that made former offenders back to their wicked lifestyle. Another reason for this tendency originating from unemployment. The former prisoners reportedly found it difficult to earn a living since they cannot obtain any occupation. A criminal background drastically diminishing or even eliminating the criminal job opportunity. It led them to the point of desperation and, as a result, forcing them to commit a crime to pay their fundamental expenses
Consequently, it is important to take solutions to tackle this problem. In the first place, the government should have job creation schemes to ensure the security of employment. Vocational training during their sentence time can be a good means of settling convict's life after releasing them from the penitentiary. In addition, various government agencies invited former criminal to work as a senior adviser. Another solution to be taken is to improve and change the public standpoint about the former prisoner through education and media. Interviewing with the former offender in talk shows or reportings can be a good case in point
To summarize, the backslide of the former criminal due to the discrimination of people and the unemployment caused by the criminal records. However, this hassle can be solved by eliminating public prejudice through education and mass media. Furthermore, the assurance about employment from the government
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-31 | BaoMinhTu | 84 | view |
| 2021-10-17 | datnguyentienhnvn@gmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2020-12-21 | chauanh14 | 61 | view |
| 2020-07-28 | mindfulielts | 84 | view |
| 2020-03-28 | longpm2k | 67 | view |
- Today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. Discuss the causes of risingunemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions. 56
- Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children s development than playing computer games To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like Is it good for children What are the consequences when they grow up 84
- In today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot 95
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our livesgenerally more comfortable but many traditional values and customs have been lostand this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... there is a variety of explanations for the backslide of offenders. First and foremost, there...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riminated by their spouse and children. An illustration of this is that the divo...
^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e a good case in point To summarize, the backslide of the former criminal due to the discr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42535211268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06758364689 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7798025396 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156620068474 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461755550052 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029381231265 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101708512043 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107203018289 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.