n some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour,
while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Even though a majority of the populace vocalizes that there should be stringent rules and regualtion for the behavior
of children, a minority believes that there should be liberal atmosphere. However, I agree with the statement that strick
code of behaviour is imperative to bestow them luminous career as these rules instill the ethical values and turn the
behaviour into life long habits.
Since in the formative ages the children have unique curiosity to grasp about their external surroundings, thus by inculcating
moral and social values among them would definitely pave the path of strong career ahead . Seemingly, when parents frame our code of
conduct for offsprings and inspire them to oblige the rules, then they get acquainted with the mertis of etiquette. Also, it
is biased to overlook the facts stated by American Child Welfare council that team work and compensation behavior are one
of essential virtues which every young should possess in order to build a perfect and noble society. Therefore, until the parents
do not apprise them with importance of manners , they would not respect any code of behaviour.
Though teach children about the etiquette are one of the arduous tasks, parents should realize their responsibilities and
tailor out unique set of manners for their tender birds. As a result, these rules would be conductive in getting rid of nasty
habits and convert these behavioral change into habits which would be stong pillar of career. To exemplify, as per the
survey carried out by The New York Times, in the gone calendar year, the scholars who are punctual in their salad years are
exceptionally more successful than lethargic ones.
In conclusion, although freedom turn children into matured ones, ethical values and good habits are indispensable part of
prevailing epoch which lays foundation of great success in the furture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31561461794 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63227752483 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.5535107898 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 160.0 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14591829952 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550405313101 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354615215769 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426303659695 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379434246625 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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