You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter,
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request accommodation at Oshawa, Canada. I will be attending the English Language Course of three months' duration at Durham College located at Oshawa, which will start on 25th May and complete on 25th August.
I will be arriving there on 20th May evening and will leave on the 30th of August morning. I would like to have a single room for this time and I would prefer to have my own bathroom as do not want to share. Furthermore, if possible try to arrange the accommodation with the meals near the college premises. I also want to join a gym as I am very health conscious hence, I want a room where this facility is accessible.
Could you please tell me how much it cost for the accommodation? How will you accept my fee, either VISA cards are acceptable? I had never been to this place earlier could you let me know whether I need to take public transport or a taxi to commute college? Any kind of extra information about the nearby place will be appreciated.
Look forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th May and complete on 25th August. I will be arriving there on 20th May even...
^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll leave on the 30th of August morning. I would like to have a single room for th...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oom where this facility is accessible. Could you please tell me how much it cos...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57711442786 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62203687037 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5851266074 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22321718686 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793289669099 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064213428184 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118533320822 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047306082603 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.