In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
These days, shopping is not only a daily housework, but also a hobby of the majority. The gists of this tendency, in fact, come from the ways people enjoy their lives. While some people think that it currently harms the living habits of communities, I would argue that regarding shopping as a hobby is a positive trend.
First of all, going to the markets can create pressure to family members. It lies in the fact that people want to do something that they love, instead of doing things that others let them do. Therefore, when we regard shopping as a daily task, people have the pressure to finish those tasks with tiredness and laziness. Meanwhile, regarding shopping as a hobby makes people feel free to swipe their credit card. They can make purchases only one time per week, in their spare time for instance, to buy enough weekly commodities and necessary products. Moreover, all family members can gather weekly to go shopping and have relaxing time together, instead of having to run errands alone under pressure.
Secondly, today is the era of technology so people have enough facilities for long-time preservation. Thanks to refrigeration, buying food everyday in order to eat fresh is no longer necessary. We are likely to preserve foods and perishables with the help of high-tech equipment. For instance, my family go to BigC supermarket together every weekend. We buy enough raw food for the following week as well as some essential household products. All these things can be preserved safely for weeks in refrigerators, and whenever we would want to use them, we can just put them in a microwave oven.
To put it in a nutshell, from making life more enjoyable and convenient to reducing pressure, the shopping trend nowadays can easily solve many problems and bring benefits to families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...n. Thanks to refrigeration, buying food everyday in order to eat fresh is no longer nece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94754098361 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65567698777 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1549393002 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19547078243 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637210831193 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752967760667 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130609633355 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849169179954 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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