Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree and disagree?
In this day and age, we are living in a worth where digital communications technology is a heated topic and often discussed. It is commonly argued that it creates some certain detrimental impacts on social connections among people nowadays. In my opinion, I completely agree with that argument.
To begin with, it is obviously undeniable that more and more people are relying in digital technology regard to many conveniences they bring without realising that they are limiting their relations due to the lack of real interactions. Facebook perfectly exemplifies this situation. Numerous adolescents prefer staying at their bed to surf facebook and comment on others' pictures or activities all day to going out to have a lovely dinner with their friends. This phenomenon could lead to lack society's knowledge of a large portion of teenagers and have a negative impact on the sustainable development of every relationships.
Furthermore, the permission for children who have an apparent limited life skills and knowledge approach communication technology too early might be the main reason leading to the rise in the number of children autism cases in morden community. A child could find a range of interesting things on facebook, make friends with several people on instagram which might be more significant than save their time to communicate with others, even their own family. It is no surprise that the rise of children aged 10 to 18 who was being autism has been linked to the development of facebook according to a research conducted in Vietnam.
In conclusion, communication technology has apparently several positive sides and I believe we introduce some solutions to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'communications'' or 'communication's'?
Suggestion: communications'; communication's
... we are living in a worth where digital communications technology is a heated topic and often ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27205882353 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02433004678 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6882619142 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166144149218 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586662140638 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375041268603 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105151509098 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032854967169 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.