The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they give birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006
The bar chart displays the information about the age of women in Australia at the time their first child was born in 1996, 1986 and 2006. Each year is divided into 6 groups by age.
In 1996, most of women had their first child when they were from 20 to 24 years old, which taken two third of the total - 66%. That proportion quickly decreased to 40% in 1986. However, it slightly grew by 5% to 45% in 2006 calculation. The "19 and under" group had a large proportion in 1966 but rapidly drop from 35% to 20% in 1986. Later, in 2006 it continuously fell to 10%, which shows that women didn't want to give their birth to their first child soon. The percentage of women who wanted to born their first child in 40 years old or more is the smallest of all group which was always under or equal 5% for 40 years from 1966 to 2006. The age that women nowadays want to have a first baby is from 25 to 30 years old. Its percentage have been rise from 40% in 1966 to 55% in 1986. This proportion decreases by 5% compare to 1986 percentage in 2006. Women who was from 30 years old to 34 years old take the biggest rate when they had their first off-spring. It slowly claimed from 15% in 1966 to 20% in 1986 and sharply jumped to 55% in 2006, nearly 3 times compare to 20 years before. The rate of first birth givers aged between 34 and 39 years old saw go up.
Overall, through the bar chart above, Australian women tend to give birth to their first child more lately by the time. The percentage of each year seem to be right-forward which mean the older women are the more they want to have the first kid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...divided into 6 groups by age. In 1996, most of women had their first child when they were fr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...sly fell to 10%, which shows that women didnt want to give their birth to their first...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17419354839 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13770028601 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470967741935 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0699823813 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407787912453 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139548273341 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104106591258 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306689463181 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439870156999 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.49 61.2550243902 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...divided into 6 groups by age. In 1996, most of women had their first child when they were fr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...sly fell to 10%, which shows that women didnt want to give their birth to their first...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17419354839 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13770028601 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470967741935 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0699823813 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407787912453 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139548273341 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104106591258 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306689463181 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439870156999 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.49 61.2550243902 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.