The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend.
The phenomenon of the aging population tends to be increased in recent years, especially in developed countries. With this trend, we can perceive that the pros and cons existed parallel.
It is so apparent that a large number of aging people retire after hard working years will lead to a profound effect on the worker force of the countries. We usually say that better comes with ages; aging people have lots of experience in working and playing the main role for almost all activities of the countries. They used to face problems or difficulties in work, so they can know how to remedy mistakes and figure out new ways to complete their work the most effectively. They are people playing an extremely crucial role in making economical development of the countries. If the aging staff retire and the younger generations are shortage, it will be a big concern for every country. Lots of elderly people may become a burden for the government because it takes a big budget to support making their living, and treating the infirmities of age.
By the way, it is also some positive sides which are undeniable. Although they are in retiring age, they also contribute to the communities actively. To illustrate, in school, the life experience of the elderly can be taken advantage of. Students who learn lots of theories in skills books, or history books teaching about events in the past will be more interested in learning if the elderly who used to experience these events or apply these theories are invited in some learning period time. Also, thanks to precious knowledge collected during the lifetime of the elderly, the young generation can maintain a vital link between the past and the present, some traditions and customs are also be preserved and brought into play. Another way in which the older generation can continue to fulfill their valuable experience is that the organizations, companies can invite them to work part-time as a mentor for younger employees.
In brief, the trend of the aging population has both upside and downside. With a positive perspective, we can realize that increasing the number of the elderly does not cause as many negative effects as we think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ted parallel. It is so apparent that a large number of aging people retire after hard working ...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ing an extremely crucial role in making economical development of the countries. If the ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in brief, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94037940379 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67522367359 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547425474255 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2055379834 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149520395236 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524957032126 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683979950958 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121615134314 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936523069584 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.