Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
It is scientifically proven that the roots of our personality can be traced all the way back to infancy. Nonetheless, I suppose adolescence is of vital/crucial importance in developing personalities in later life. This essay will elucidate the idea.
I strongly believe that the traits that appear in teenage years are predictive of a wide range of outcomes in life including educational attainment, financial success and risk of unemployment. In reality, adolescents have to face with more difficulties such as emotional crises compared to babies. Moreover, in adolescence, they start puberty and experience hormonal and neural changes that lead to personality development.
The changes stemming from experiences in teenage years could significantly affect the temperament of children. For example, some twins who have the same conduct during their babyhood. However, when they become older, their behaviour could change by virtue of distinct environmental factors rather than genetic factors.
In conclusion, teenage years have a more major impact on personality characteristics than any period in a lifetime.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72891566265 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30395738731 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722891566265 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3339275316 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208790548071 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713579395437 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655095160412 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128664127952 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667049550899 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72891566265 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30395738731 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722891566265 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3339275316 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208790548071 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713579395437 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655095160412 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128664127952 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667049550899 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.