In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Fast food is undoubted when it comes to popularity among various of people. Many reasons have already been stated why people choose fast food instead of other healthier foods. Because of it, huge number of people are suffering from serious health diseases. Therefore, I completely agree if the governments try to impose higher tax on this type of food.
People choose fast food for its taste and they also serve the food faster than other restaurants. In addition to that, people think that the food is a very convenient and efficient if you are busy person who do not have much time. No wonder most of the people in this world refering fast food as their daily foods. But, this thing affects numerous of people with their health. The common illness is cough, but thing can get really serious if people consume too much of fast food, for example, get cancer or other diseases. The treatments are fairly expensive, so it will be better to prevent it at all cost.
In order to demolish that habit, governments need to demand tax to be increased, if so, people might think twice before purchasing and consuming fast foods. If this regulation will be happening soon, plentiful number of people might change their lifestyle to healthier one. Also, if the number keeps increasing, it will be a hassle for both the government and hospital team.
Therefore, as I also see a lot of people suffering from different diseases and feel bad for them, I will fully support the governments to promulgate this regulation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...e already been stated why people choose fast food instead of other healthier foods. ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
... on this type of food. People choose fast food for its taste and they also serve ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82307692308 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48461538462 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.751140679 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353331082201 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123679238636 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593701980701 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205897398093 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804400925441 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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