Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To begin with, not everyone enjoy the things he or she have to do. For example, work, u must work to earn money and cover all your needs. But, not everyone can love their work, they can work, but only for their needs, without any pleasure. For that reason some people need to spend time doing the things they like, otherwise their lives will pass gloomly. Another example: parenthood. Every parent have to feed, educate, care, dress, clean after their kid. It's their responsibility, and it's not easy at all. Situation can be harder if parent is single, or have to go to job parallelly. And therefore, free time to spend on personal enjoyment might be needed, simply, to not to go insane.
Moreover, spending a lot of time doing things you like may be helpful. Tere's a chance that you can "find" yourself. By that I mean that people usually do things that are not intended for them, whereas they can be really good at something that they never tried before. For example, you can have a great tallent to sing, which you can find during, for example, karaoke, and you, by the way, really will enjoy with your singing. So, later, you can somehow develop this skill, and gain profit from this. The best of both worlds, isn't it?
Finally, our enjoyment, pleasure, and we at genera are the most important. Nothing else matters if we feel good. At long last, we might be dead by tomorrow, so why don't we just spend time on ourselves.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...not everyone enjoy the things he or she have to do. For example, work, u must work t...
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Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...te, care, dress, clean after their kid. Its their responsibility, and its not easy ...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...fit from this. The best of both worlds, isnt it? Finally, our enjoyment, pleasure...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, we might be dead by tomorrow, so why dont we just spend time on ourselves.
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be dead by tomorrow, so why dont we just spend time on ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, for example, i mean, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58914728682 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34076439097 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.990166167 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7777777778 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246473021674 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766675410412 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110088639621 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148359892348 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914644168848 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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