Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Societies and corporations both are interconntected, so both have responsiblity for each others. Corporations thrives on the societies and societies need the corporation for better development. In my opinion, I do agree with the suggestions that it's the obligation of the corporation to maintain and take care of the environments and societies.
To begin with, the corporation is the integral part of the societies and it's helps the societies in financial development. Societies comprises of the peoples who runs these gigantic corporation and help them to achevie thier target. Hence, it's the primary job of the corporation to take care of their supporter, eventually it's the mutual benefit. For an example, the corporation which are operating in the remote area is soley depends on the large numbers of labour workers. Consequently, labours and corporation both are inter-dependent, both are working for each other's benefits. Sometimes, it happens that due to some technical mistake some toxic gas leaks from that corporations and it adversley effect the labour health, who are living around the corporations. Hence, it's responsibility of the corporation to helps the affected peoples, because it's running soley on that workers. However sometimes corporations try to neglect some issue face the condem from the societies and it will adversely affect their reputations. The above example illustrate that it's in the best interest of corporations that it will take care and support the societies around them. Thus, we can say that corporations must promote the societies in which they are functioning.
Furthermore, the environment is the precious gift we received at free of cost from nature's. The corporations are making the too much polutions that environments process get distrubed. Eventually it's started affecting the human life. It's good that corporations are working towards the advancememts of the human life, but it's not helpfull if it's indirectly harms societies. For an example, one corporation making the shoes and clothes helps the societies in one way. However, the pollutions it release in the water and air adversely affect the surrounding environmets. Hence, in the long term it's possible that environmets becomes inhabitant for human to live. Consequently, there is no use of such techology or economy when we doesn't have proper environments to live. The above example, illustrate that the corporation should priorities the environments against the income and if they don't do the same it's harmfull for themselves only.
Of course, some may argue that the main goal of the corportation is to increase the economy of the country. However, if they don't take care of the environments it will adversley harm themselves in one way or other. The peoples who runs the corporations are also part of the societies and environmets. if they didn't protect them then they are making injuries to themselves.
All things considering, we can say that it's the benifical for the corporation to promote the well-being of the surrounding societies and it's environmetns. It's true that money is the essential part in any corporation but it's the obligation of the corporation to maintain the surrouning environmets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2713.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3300589391 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16929306643 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440078585462 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.0 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1835325385 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8928571429 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1785714286 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293236209231 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880461434509 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518399520723 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181754514978 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453976828685 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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