The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children.
What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy?
Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's lifestyle where usually both the parents need to work, it is proposed by some that the government has to financially support those who have new-borns. This would ease the financial burden on them and allow one of them to dedicate her full-time to caring for the baby. In this essay, I will discuss some of the merits and demerits of this proposition.
To begin with, this project would carry a hefty cost to the government. there are numerous babies born on a daily bases and if the government was to pay for every single family, it would economically cripple the nation. This is next to impossible for the nations where they have high populations. For instance, it is next to impossible for a country like India to amend such an act with a population of 1.5 billion with an annual rate of 25 million newborns. Furthermore, it provides an opportunity for some people to misuse this policy and unnecessarily get pregnant, in order to get free money, this can be observed in the nations that are not prosperous like Indonesia, where people choose this route to get more rations from the government.
However, it is has been acknowledged in recent years that the bondings in the families have weakened. Firstly, one of the main reasons for such an issue is the lack of time and attention of the parents to their children which eventually causes a lack of affection of the children towards their parents. This policy would address this issue by allowing at least one of the parents to spend quality time with their child while growing and not worrying about the financial consequences of not working. Recent research in the UK has published that the children who spent time with their parents since being born to tend to be more successful and sincere in their studies when compared to their counterparts whose parents work all the time.
To conclude, the proposition that the government should provide finance to the parents of infants, has both downsides and upsides and not all nations can afford such a policy and it may have serious drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, as to, at least, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58736380475 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519662921348 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7692771643 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179393654585 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618525874003 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426637988427 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107002557355 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368124184014 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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