Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialise in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education giving us an understanding of the world around us and offers us an opportunity to use that knowledge wisely is one of the most powerful things in life. Although some people may believe that students should specifically study in a subject to be an expert, and try to restrict them from numerous academic courses, others claim that there is nothing terrible in studying various subjects. From my point of view, I agree with the latter view and think that studying in copious subjects can also bring many benefits to students, and I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, studying in many subjects is significantly fundamental to being an expert in the future. Most children need to learn copious subjects not only studying in the art majors such as literature, drawing and music subject but also learning in the science majors to improve their skills and apply in other studies which kids are interested them. For example, Steve Jobs, who is the founder of the famous Apple company selling products about computers such as computer notebook, iPad and iWatch, did not graduate in computer major, but he graduated in logo design. He brought his knowledge from logo design to use in his product brand by using technique simple memory brand. From the above example, learning in broad subjects can vastly increase the chances of success with their careers in the future.
Without a doubt, connection or relationship with other people is an essential thing to both working and studying. Studying in many subjects helps to understand the behaviour and attitude of other persons because if the learner focuses only specific subject, he will hardly recognise the other aspect, which is profoundly different from his knowledge. For instance, someone who graduated in automotive engineering is an expert in designing luxury cars, and he would like to sell them. However, he has never known about marketing skills, so he scarcely sells it. Therefore, he should study in many subjects to make a relationship with other friends to understand different aspects of marketing.
In conclusion, studying is a vital thing for everyone who would like to accomplish in their lives. According to a famous quote, the more we study in many subjects, the more we highly get the chance to succeed in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Education giving us an understanding of ...
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...erstand different aspects of marketing. In conclusion, studying is a vital thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02295918367 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6331424557 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558673469388 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.161525522 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.266666667 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168907059506 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058282437072 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457263619625 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984358124142 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509541531601 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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