Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:
• What you bought
• What the problem is
• Why you want a refund.
Dear Sir,
I write to request for a refund on the washing machine I bought from your organization.
At about 2:17pm a fortnight ago, I purchased a washing machine from your office at Leeds Street. The order number and model of the washing machine were AJ7645T and XTY123 respectively. It weighs 65kg and silver in colour.
The following problems were discovered when I unpacked the machine at my country home. Firstly, the rotor was not rotating affecting the washing section. Also, the handle was not properly connected making it difficult to carry. Lastly, the cooling chamber did not function properly after I turned it on for one hour.
Your refund policy says customers are entitled to refund should any fault be discovered within one month of purchase. Thus, I request a cash refund with immediate effect in compliance with your policy. Also, as a premium customer, I expect a written apology alongside the cash refund notification.
As you will appreciate, this is an urgent matter and I look forward to your timely response.
Yours faithfully,
Azuka Umeononigwe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: silver
...XTY123 respectively. It weighs 65kg and silver in colour. The following problems were discove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18079096045 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72255426049 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3172393364 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196417977065 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575434268424 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683436502081 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1172625703 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963496421872 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.