A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- thank him/her for the invitation
- explain why you cannot come
- ask him about others time to visit
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jay,
I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting me to spend holiday period on your home. Unfortunately, I have busy schedule work now so I will not able to make it.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I recently has got a new job on a media company. Now I am charged of leading new project of my company so I am very busy. I have to plan ideas, operate events and activities to promote our new products. I do not mean complain but I really love my job because I always want to work on young and dynamic environment.
Could you let me know when you have free time? Because I would love to come to your new home and stay with your family. I always want to travel oversea once time so I think It will be a wonderful experience. Anyway, I will be free on next year because I have done my project. I would certainly visit you on next summer.
Please let me know.
Your friend,
Ha Phuong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...my situation in more detail. I recently has got a new job on a media company. Now I...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19101123596 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38138638953 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5368438521 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.2857142857 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221207950259 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740119350228 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10029237043 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151797632225 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1066171483 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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