The diagram gives information on the sum of six purchaser products in four European countries.
The diagram gives information on the sum of six purchaser products in four European countries.
Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling.
How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of Germany demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it exhibited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterling.CDs of Britain is around 164,Toys of Britain is 168 and it is almost similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic film showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...cts in four European countries. Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Persona...
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...eme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated sim...
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...of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling....
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... is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic fi...
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...illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.V...
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Suggestion: Very
...t is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of ...
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Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CDs
... number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around...
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...nce,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling. How I...
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Suggestion: , Personal
...ounds of sterling. How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number wi...
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...similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pou...
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Suggestion: Personal
...t is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of...
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Suggestion: In
...many demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can s...
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...rsonal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds s...
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... displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tenn...
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Suggestion: Tennis
...lar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,...
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Suggestion: Perfumes
...it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and ...
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Suggestion: , Toys
...e.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it...
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Suggestion: Perfumes
...ited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the s...
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...f Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterli...
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...similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic...
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...ilm showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58636363636 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32618896905 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431818181818 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 22.4926829268 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.539410698 43.030603864 838% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.666666667 112.824112599 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.3333333333 22.9334400587 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100535659889 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.103423049105 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0843802449381 451% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0819641961636 464% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 13.2329268293 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 61.2550243902 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 10.3012195122 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.9970731707 284% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.0658536585 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...cts in four European countries. Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Persona...
^^^
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Perfumes
...eme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated sim...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling....
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Very
... is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic fi...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.V...
^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Very
...t is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of ...
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Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CDs
... number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , around
...nce,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling. How I...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Personal
...ounds of sterling. How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number wi...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pou...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personal
...t is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...many demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can s...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...rsonal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds s...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tenn...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tennis
...lar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and ...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Toys
...e.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...ited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the s...
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Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...f Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterli...
^^^
Line 3, column 840, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic...
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Line 3, column 926, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ilm showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58636363636 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32618896905 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431818181818 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 22.4926829268 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.539410698 43.030603864 838% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.666666667 112.824112599 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.3333333333 22.9334400587 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100535659889 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.103423049105 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0843802449381 451% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0819641961636 464% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 13.2329268293 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 61.2550243902 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 10.3012195122 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.9970731707 284% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.0658536585 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.