It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
It's a natural phenomena that humans love nature,to explore the new things they strike towards different adventurous places on this beautiful planet.Due to modern technologies scientist and tourists get chance to visit the intersection point of earth that is called south pole. For the development of this area it stick with some merits and demerits, that are discussed in essay.
First and foremost advantages of this development is that scientist if visit that area they may be take some samples or informative data. They will help in different ways for example to solve the major issue like global warming, degradation of land,rainfall.Researchers get chance to familiar the unaware people with that habitat.In this way mostly tourist attract towards them that will boost the economy of country as well as government take steps to develop the tourism industry more widely.
secondly, the disadvantages of this remote area are more than advantages. By visiting these isolated locations may be tourists and scientists strike with heavy snow storms and winds because at that area temperature is very low frequently in minus degree Celsius, than limited rescued facilities are their.Another point is that by visiting this type of places people not take care about purification of environment and produce pollution their that will directly disturb the natural habitat of animals.Many of them are brink to extinct.
In conclusion, due to technologies it is become into reality to visit the natural or isolated areas, scientist and tourist both visiting this area and have undoubtedly advantages with some drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40711462451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04399153826 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.899776423 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.428571429 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1428571429 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248339368995 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12453777174 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277983994417 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151871486475 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269613600279 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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