People work because they need money to live What are some other reasons that people work Discuss one or more of these reasons Use specific examples and details to support your answer
Working is one of the most important aspect of life for anyone regardless of the level of education or
the society we live in. The very first reason to have a job and working is earning money to manipulate our
living cost. Actually, I believe this is the most important reason but not the only one. If this was the only
reason for going to work then peaple from reach reach and wealthy families should have stayed home forever. In my view
the following are the most important reasons for the fact that the money is not the only inpiring issue for working.
First of all, humanbeing is creative and curious about the environment. Human kind always feel the need to
gain more knowledge. In order to satisfy this inheret need one should beging to creat things. The art is a
perfect example to illustrate this fact. For instance the paining which is consider as a job nowadays, born in caves thousends years ago. But
The main reason for that was not earning something to eat or wear. Lots of things in modern life also follow the same pattern, The eagerness to discover
universe leads to big organisation and even private companies which fund billions each year to study deep space without any kind of shor term results or gain.
Second, we should not forget the psciclogical effects on our life from jobs and work. Peaple need to be in society and communicate with each other. One cannot live with his/her
family inside an iceland full of luxury forever. For instance, according to a scientific reaserch on 100 individuals, scientists revealed that more than 70 precent of the stable relationships
which affect human life based on the workplace. Moreover, other social needs such as making close friends who you can rely on in a serious situation or in a other words the feel of mental safety
can be satisfied better by having a job in which one can connect to wide range of characters and choose the person who is match better to fullfill and satisfy this sense.
In sum, we cannot deny the important role of earning money by work and pemanent jobs, however there are lots of reasons which enforce humanbeing to have a job. Therefor, evenif we could have the all money
we need each month without even going out of home, we mentally and pscicologically need to do it. And the recent pandemic in 2019 also proved this fact that even by supports from governments, after a while, peaple
prefer going to work instead of just staying home with their families. Human need human and having a job and work help to have a wider social life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68957871397 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39926062393 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525498891353 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9438794304 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199634175731 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646257744567 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042429306623 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685247903298 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04339266248 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.