Reporting a table

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Reporting a table

Submitted by Fthytrfr on Sat, 06/13/2020 - 13:50

The supplied table reports the society needs and goods percentage of various countries in Europe continent. As it is presented that the goods are divided into 3 types, which are food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear, and lastly in the leisure/education. In general, the most needed by the 5 countries are the food/drinks//tobacco. Turkey has the highest percentage of the foods type, while the Italy has the highest percentage of the clothing/footwear, and Turkey also has the highest demand of leisure/education. In the second section which is clothing or footwear the Sweden has the lowest percentage because only can reach the 5,40 %. Nextly, on the third section Spain doesn’t has too much interest on the leisure/education because they only need 1,98%.
This can be seen from the presented table that Sweden has the least goods needed compared with 4 other countries. Sweden only reach the 24,39 %. On the other hand, Turkey becomes the top of goods percentage if it’s compared with rest countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 683, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...tly, on the third section Spain doesn’t has too much interest on the leisure/educat...
^^^
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needed compared" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'comparing' or 'to be compared'.
Suggestion: comparing; to be compared
... that Sweden has the least goods needed compared with 4 other countries. Sweden only re...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, second, so, third, while, as to, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63304662994 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0222160528 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100061196321 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473665802317 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101466691036 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735583331708 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010290080937 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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