space exploration
The lecture and the passage both are about the private space exploration.The author of the passage claims that it will benefit scientific discoveries and humans.The lecturer challenges the several claim made by the author.He is of the point that it won't benefit humans.
Firstly, the author says that privatization will make the space flight cheaper due to competition which will benefit both the space tourist and scientist for their discoveries.The lecturer rebuts this statement by saying that instead of being cheaper it will be more dear.Making space traffic control systems and verifying the safety measures will fuel up the cost instead of bringing it down.
Secondly, the writer of the passage says that privatization will increase the scientific discoveries and will make the industry grow giving more employement to scientist.The lecturer argues with the statement by saying that many private companies will lure the scientist by giving more money.As a result of this they will mosllty concentrate on their private research instead of goverment research work.
Finally, the author posists that the expense of space travel will be borne by their customers which will reduce the burden on tax payers.The lecturer contests this statement by saying that it takes billions of dollars to make space station airport and this money cannot be raised from customers so instead of lowering the burden on tax payers it will increase their burden.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34934497817 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71965822752 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493449781659 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 21.2450331126 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3549435385 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 306.25 110.228320801 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 21.698381199 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06452816374 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108509542954 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778576145579 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536584292346 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778576145579 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536584292346 0.0443174109184 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.3589403974 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 53.8541721854 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.0289183223 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.2367328918 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.42419426049 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.498013245 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.2008830022 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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