You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the enrollment for the course Data Analytics mentioned in the newspaper yesterday. I am currently working as a economist, but have greater interest in computer studies. It would be great if you can consider me, as I do not have completed an elementary course in the same field.
I have my masters in economics and after working with data and doing heavy number crunching, I have realized my passion towards the advanced technologies in data analytics. In fact, I have learnt SQL, R languages related to data analysis from a fellow colleague who is a data scientist out of pure interest.
While I understand that this course requires a mandatory completion of elementary course, I request you to consider my case as an exception and will not let you down for this great deed. I am willing to come to the college and may be you can test my computing skills and can take a call. I strongly believe that with the advancements, technology has become an integral part in everyone's life and this course will enhance my technological cravings.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sumanth
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| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-23 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er yesterday. I am currently working as a economist, but have greater interest in...
^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'colleague'.
Suggestion: colleague
...nguages related to data analysis from a fellow colleague who is a data scientist out of pure int...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...I am willing to come to the college and may be you can test my computing skills and ca...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...hnological cravings. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Su...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84295620789 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9564519958 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319816764712 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115646824793 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692273966364 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184543317439 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670323890202 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.