Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often thought by many that studying at home using paper books and online study materials is good to save time. However, some people argue that going to tertiary institutes are far progressive because attending classrooms are not only foster the hard skills of books, but also soft skills of learning. I firmly agree with the latter view point.
To begin with, firstly, attending Classroom lectures are not only important for mastering the subject but also it adds different attributes in a student. Similarly, learning is not only restricted to mocking books, but its primary purpose is to making a literate and civilized Society of future. For example, soft skills of learning like human behaviour, business communications, team building, leadership, and body language are equally vital to learn for a youth to be succeed in the future in terms of his career path as well as in a community, which cannot be fostered by distance learning education. Secondly, studying at home do not provide feedback sessions on the week area of students, which makes it an inefficient for further improvement. However, attending colleges make pupils more familiar with their imperfect aspects of life and further scope of betterment is far more in the letter case. Knowing the background of each students, an instructor can addresses a student more specifically in a particular way.
Lastly, self learning at home fails to contribute in providing a soothing study environment due to plenty of destruction available at home, such as frequent visiting guests, violent fights between parents, and addiction of a student toward TV or internet. Thus, any of these reasons, make a home unfavourable place to study, and unsuitable for learning and healthy mental growth. For instance, according to a recent survey in India held by IIM institutes of distance learning, reveals that fifty percent of students who opt for distance learning courses fail to pass their exams in first attempt due to lack of motivation and mental illness of being at home for a long time.
To conclude, tertiary institutes jobs are not only to provide hard skills of subjects but also to help a community in making civilized and sensible group people. As a result, in my opinion, distance learning cannot provide same benefits as attending classrooms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...e. For example, soft skills of learning like human behaviour, business communication...
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Line 3, column 964, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'address'
Suggestion: address
...und of each students, an instructor can addresses a student more specifically in a partic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16489361702 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80640939287 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2163699007 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238571148921 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772614210051 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067372085467 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142533232216 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410653876192 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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