Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the internet, the world is now a global village where, within a short amount of time, any kind of necessity is met. Yet, I think that globalization is wholly the positive thing for two reasons: less cost and high quality of products.
Firstly, globalization has made high prices of items decline which are on the top of a demand list. One of the major challenges people have faced till today is the over-priced cars. Because of competition in global market, people are able to buy their dream car, for example, through booking online. Although customs duties may restrict free flow of goods from other parts of the globe, the cost still can be relatively cheap compared to the locally produced ones. Last year, I purchased Tesla E6, a cheap and environmentally friendly car, from the USA without additional cost for shipment, making the transaction process easy in customs.
Secondly and even more importantly, people these days can buy quality products for the less cost arisen from globalization. In the past it was said that only wealthy people could buy quality items being available in different parts of the world. However, nowadays everyone buys those so called products in exchange of small amount of money, which was only dream before. If there was not internet, the gap between rich and poor would have increased, not allowing everyone to buy superior products at a reasonable price. For example, people could purchase expensive, yet quality clothes from several countries, but, it is a global process now that people can do so whether they are financially abundant or not
In conclusion, not only has the similarity among countries in trade had a huge impact on a decreased cost of valuable products such as cars, but also the widening gap between rich and poor is not ubiquitous, meaning that everyone is able to buy quality goods for the less cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94006309148 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61731956993 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0148443973 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174694252079 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604673924792 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501573868212 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966841207458 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419767952669 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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