A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Education of the students is vital one. In fact, the future of the country or nation lies on the knowledge of the young buds. The prompt recommends that the nation not belabor this point too long and simply give the students the indistinguishable curriculum to the students prior to their college. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that the national curriculum should not be biased.
To begin with, the nationwide syllabus are the integral part of the student also in remote areas. When a nation has the equality to the rights, equality to the gender etc. why does it should not have the equality in education. For instance, there are numerous boards of syllabus in the nation, where the higher paid student gets the excellence of merit knowledge whereas the students from the secluded areas aren’t. If the nation has the same syllabus, then the students will get the same knowledge nationwide.
Secondly, the government of India has proposed a new system of entrance exam common to all the students after their high school. In this system, when the student with different syllabus has appeared of the exam, then the students from the mediocre board will not able the ace the exam. Furthermore, affects the future of the individual and as well nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the individual and as well nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93577981651 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58582583414 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3047550852 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.21951772744 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167787075772 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653374059445 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323148106849 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115868178932 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03231941948 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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