In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? and it is positive or negative development?
In some coutries nowadays, more and more people spend longer time at work. There are some reasons for this change and I think that is a positive development.
To begin with, many people nowdays, especially young people tend to work harder and longer for higher salary and more working experience. The more time people spend at their work place, the more job they can fisish leading to higher salary to meet the demand in their life. Futhermore, many young people choose a hard working life to improve their knowledge and working experience so that they can work more professional and improve their productivity. Young people also want to show to their employer that they have passion and responsibility for the job and company so that they should be given some promotion prospects. Lastly, many famous businessmen spend long time at work because simply like it.
Due to those reasons above, I think that people spending more time at work is a positive development. It is true that, countries with long average working time are more economically successful than those coutries not having a long working time because there is a direct limk between hours and the outcome. For example, the magic development of Japan in 20th century and now is the result of a hardworking society where working time can be up to 20 hours a day. On the other hand, many people love working because a hardworking life give them sense of fullfilment or feeling that they are important.
All in all, the biggest reason why people choose to spend long hours at work just the improvement of their own life and the society. Due to that, I believe this is a positive development in this modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cally successful than those coutries not having a long working time because there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, for example, i think, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80276816609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53581994195 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480968858131 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9758191069 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36243507484 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151023505919 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592688059722 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268711244583 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593893400376 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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