HIGHER LEARNING SHOULD BE MADE FOR EVERYONE
It is commonly understood these days that higher education is essential for everyone. It has a lot of benefits, especially for them who want to get a great job. Some people believed that higher learning should not be made for everyone. However, in my opinion, it is strongly agreed that higher education should be prepared for everyone because of the two convincing reasons.
First of all, higher education should be free for everyone is essential, especially for them who have lower-income students; thus, they can get a college degree freely. For example, in my country there are a lot of people have a financial problem. Some of them had difficulties in fulfilling their daily life, especially for a poor family. Therefore they cannot bring their children to get a higher education. However, if education is free, everyone have more chance to reach their dreams. Moreover, it will relieve people stress because they do not need to think about the tuition fee. In short, free education provide convenience for those who have lower-income.
Secondly, by giving free education to everyone, there will be an increase in the number of people to attend college. It will create a more well-educated workforce and a population that has better critical thinking skills. Therefore it could be lead to more innovation in all areas of society. For instance, Germany is one of the countries that provide free education. It can be seen that this county have a lot of innovations such as environmentally friendly transportation, building, and others that have a significant impact on the future life. In short, free education indicate an educated people.
To conclude, it is strongly believed that higher education should be made for everyone because of the two convincing reasons that I have mentioned before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14237288136 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89225058962 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8911248014 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389480846834 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131370942275 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154674188259 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30550230066 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166208220178 0.056905535591 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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