The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A nation, be it modern or in the ancient times of monarchy and empires, is mainly attributed to how happy the people of that nation are. A happy nation is a growing nation. The surest indicator of a great nation is therefore represented by the general welfare of the people.
It is not uncommon to see that nations with political turmoil or economic crisis resulting in general unhappiness within the people of the nation, results in slow growth of the nation. With people busy dealing with widespread issues like corruption or maybe unemployment, they tend to spend lesser focus on their personal as well as societal development. The country thus fails to focus more on its growth. Hence, a nation in which people are not looked after does not progress. People are what make up a nation and their good welfare becomes the most important aspect of greatness.
For example, the Mughal Empire in India was known to be one of the most prosperous empires of ancient times. This was mainly because the subjects of the empire were content and happy with the life their emperor had provided them with, and looked up to him. This encouraged the people to work harder at their jobs and the economy of the empires kept flourishing. This even promoted the growth of art and culture amongst people. In today’s example, China, under a communist government has proven to show the steadiest growth in the last few years. From a country suffering from acute economic crisis in the last decade to becoming one of the leading countries on the international level today, China has achieved this by adopting the policy of focusing on the welfare of its people first by providing them with employment and equal opportunities. On the contrary, countries like Venezuela have been so caught up with their political movements that their economy has been declining over the years consistently.
Agreeably, it is the success of various rulers, artists or scientists that put a nation into the limelight at an international level. A nation is also known for its world class leaders or its art and poetry or the inventions made by the people that have contributed to the growth of science all around the world. However, it fails to be a sure indicator of a great nation. These illustrious people make up a small fraction of the general population.
Thus, while famous and successful rulers, artists and scientists do bring a lot of fame and respect towards a nation, it is the general people that form a nation. Their welfare and happiness continue to be the strongest indicator of a nation’s growth and greatness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...conomy of the empires kept flourishing. This even promoted the growth of art and cul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in general, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87810383747 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66500520644 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487584650113 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9887392306 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.904761905 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256647495698 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822654881464 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626109316535 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163635299395 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485193212535 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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