in these days in many countries fear and fewer people want to become teacher particularly in secondary school what are the reason for this and how could the problem solved give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge and experience
It is ubiquitous known that teaching profession has the most reputed profession amongst the world.This attitude has undergone the sea changes ever since the modernization took place.In this epoch,minority of peoples are interesting to join teaching career.There are several causative reason behind this means elucidates in ensuing segment along with the plausible solution .
First and foremost,reason why the masses are not taking interest to choose their career as a teacher that low wages of teacher as compared to other profession.To be more precise,people spend heavy fee on their professional study to become a teacher even though after that they get low salaries which are not sufficient as their work and qualifications.For example, in Bangladesh teacher are earning only ten thousand takas where as other common profession salaries are above twenty five thousand takas.Thus this unfair earning declining the interest of youth to join teaching line.Secondly,having a high workload making them too far away from teaching.In other world,wast curriculum,text books and other assignments ,co-curricular activities all make them busy all time.By this i means,they are not able to take care their health as well as their family.For example,teacher always busy to check assignment,answer sheets at home. which is make them busy always.Due to this,they can not spend time to do other work, which are necessary for their personal life and health.Owing to this,some time teacher suffered health issues such as cervical and weak eye sight.last but not least,behaving rude by adolescent make them frustrated and unexpected treatment from children side and parents side create psychological depression on the teacher's brain.Not only this,they felt terrible and insulted amongst the children yet they feel uncomfortable and depressed.Hence,Nowadays a fewer people are taking interest to join this profession .
However,in this means there are various solution firstly, government should increase the wages of the teachers so that they can earn sufficient amount to survive their life which will also motivate others to choose this career.Secondly education department should reframe school curriculum, which should helpful to reduce teachers stress they should adopt other way to check their student's ability.it will be beneficial for the teachers physical health as well as psychological growth.Lastly, institutions must make some laws which will be beneficial to reduce the unmanned behave by students. if students behave with teacher unmannered way then some punishment should be given by the government so that students do respect the teachers and maintained this noble professional profession dignity and reputation.
To recapitulate,I vehemently voch that although, heavy workload and low wages are numerous causes to create people disinterest in teaching career, yet government should need to take some significant steps then again teaching became a popular profession amongst the world .
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also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, i mean, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73423423423 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33273721078 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.274164017 49.4020404114 488% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 424.333333333 106.682146367 398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 20.7667163134 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121597111092 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627552666117 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279742190481 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656943825199 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363711835378 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.6 13.0946893788 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.14 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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