Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Some people assume that higher institutions should make provision for school leavers to acquire the awareness and skills required in various occupational areas while others are of the opinion that the significant function of a tertiary institutions is for acquisition of knowledge only irrespective of it usefulness to the recruiting agent. I believe that higher institutions should provide the necessary skills need to graduates because it reduces the rate of unemployment and increases the standard of living
Firstly, skill acquisition in the higher institutions reduces the rate of unemployment among graduating students. It is an indisputable fact that the rate of unemployment in some developing countries is appalling. This is because higher institutions in such nation failed to instill the required skills needed at the labour market however, in developed nations, graduates are braced with the technical know-how at the higher institutions as a result they go into the labour market and are hired immediately without delay. To illustrate, the Japanese government passed a law in year 2000 that it is mandatory for their university students to acquire specialised skill such in manufacturing automobiles and electronics. interestingly, all young school leavers are usually absorbed in such companies. this instance apposite the above view.
Additionally, skill acquisition in the higher institutions improves the economy of the country. The reason for this is that when students graduates they get employed in various aspect of the economy thus, utilising they acquired effectively in such areas. For example, in a survey conducted the University of California New York city, it was suggested that for any economy to grow globally, great economist in such countries would need to acquire useful skills from higher institutions. Thus, supporting the above opinion.
To conclude, although they are differing opinions regarding knowledge and skill acquisition in the higher institutions, however, I believe that, graduates should learn the knowledge and skills required in the work environment from the university because, it's helps to reduce unemployment and also help in economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'institution'?
Suggestion: institution
... the significant function of a tertiary institutions is for acquisition of knowledge only ir...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'graduate'.
Suggestion: graduate
...ld provide the necessary skills need to graduates because it reduces the rate of unemploy...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...le fact that the rate of unemployment in some developing countries is appalling. ...
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... countries is appalling. This is because higher institutions in such nation faile...
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... a result they go into the labour market and are hired immediately without delay....
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...strate, the Japanese government passed a law in year 2000 that it is mandatory f...
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Suggestion: Interestingly
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Suggestion: This
...are usually absorbed in such companies. this instance apposite the above view. Ad...
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...pect of the economy thus, utilising they acquired effectively in such areas. For ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iversity of California New York city, it was suggested that for any economy to gr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...conomist in such countries would need to acquire useful skills from higher instit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... learn the knowledge and skills required in the work environment from the univers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66163141994 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12651018629 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504531722054 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.873365532 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214162451538 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688582572565 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648643812426 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149031761912 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591924727488 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'institution'?
Suggestion: institution
... the significant function of a tertiary institutions is for acquisition of knowledge only ir...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'graduate'.
Suggestion: graduate
...ld provide the necessary skills need to graduates because it reduces the rate of unemploy...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le fact that the rate of unemployment in some developing countries is appalling. ...
^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... countries is appalling. This is because higher institutions in such nation faile...
^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a result they go into the labour market and are hired immediately without delay....
^^
Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strate, the Japanese government passed a law in year 2000 that it is mandatory f...
^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the Japanese government passed a law in year 2000 that it is mandatory for their...
^^
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mandatory for their university students to acquire specialised skill such in man...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Interestingly
...ufacturing automobiles and electronics. interestingly, all young school leavers are usually a...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...are usually absorbed in such companies. this instance apposite the above view. Ad...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pect of the economy thus, utilising they acquired effectively in such areas. For ...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iversity of California New York city, it was suggested that for any economy to gr...
^^
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conomist in such countries would need to acquire useful skills from higher instit...
^^
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... learn the knowledge and skills required in the work environment from the univers...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66163141994 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12651018629 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504531722054 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.873365532 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214162451538 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688582572565 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648643812426 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149031761912 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591924727488 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.