Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that the entertainment world is a glamorous arena, and successful performers would make a massive amount. There is not a shade of doubt that entertainers get bigger salaries, which is often argued to be too much. Nonetheless, I agree with the statement that stars should be paid a large sum of money. There are numerous reasons why this should be the case.
To achieve the stage of an icon of a country, the entertainers have to pass a long and extremely challenging path, which may not be achievable for many of them. This path is rough and full of obstacles, such as stress and negative judgments. As a result, only a few can get that stage, and they have a high demand from his supporters. Maintaining their quality of work and social status seems to be the only way for these celebrities to keep their current level. Thus, there should be an equal trade-off in the form of money for those sacrifices.
Moreover, celebrities have great reception and a certain influence on almost everyone in the world, since they are usually very well-known. Many entertainers are considered role-models, especially to children and their worshippers. Consequently, their behaviors and acts will somehow affect society. So these people, in one way or another, are believed to have the ability to change humanity. Additionally, take the purpose of entertaining into account. It is supposed to make people entertained, to make them relax and have better health. And the entertainers are the ones who take part in it. As this shows, they are worth to obtain this exorbitant price as their remuneration.
All in all, it is an undeniable fact that entertainers create countless wealth and health for society. Following looking at how the community can take benefits from them, it is felt that entertainers should have such higher wages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96116504854 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91765835584 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1748596213 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6842105263 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109829596569 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337171529611 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488895696267 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711534319437 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593872976544 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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