Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, it is very trendy to carry some western costumes. The mostly young generation has a craze about modern dresses. Some peoples believe that we can
easily judge individuals' cultural traits and character.
Firstly, I cannot entirely agree with this view; because we can predict individuals' character by their choice of dresses. It is possible to reveal cultural values and backgrounds through their clothes. As all we know, India is a diverse country; here lives a variety of people of different religions. When we move from one region to another region of the country, it is strange to see the trend of wearing clothes is also varying from area to area. For example: in southern India, most women wear silk sarees, and men wear lungi-kurta. It shows their tradition. Similarly, In Sikhism, men and women wear beautiful turbans on their heads. The turbans show they have a strong belief in their religion. But from this, we cannot judge ethical values and someone's character. Some people wear devotional dresses that show their spiritual personality.
I believed that wearing functional and attractive clothes can develop an external personality. People feel cordial and more confident when they wear new and charming costumes. Celebrities and entertainers are wearing elaborate dresses. Some people and teenagers also wear loose, bright color dresses which show their carelessness and for gaining the attention of someone.
So, in the end, I conclude that the choice of clothes cannot reflect the individual's character and ethics. They only reveal about their outer appearance and culture. It can also show some of their attributes and characteristics, but no one can guess their character.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...he choice of clothes cannot reflect the individuals character and ethics. They only reveal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28308823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71262497121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1245444408 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.85 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237079493417 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717984130334 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440308233292 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125496535705 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545371871972 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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