Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people say that successful career is the result of studying at university and college. Other, however, believe that it is beneficial to get a job straight after school. I would argue that it's better to go to university and college.
The option to start working straight after school is attractive for several reasons. First, since many young people want to earn money as soon as possible. In fact, they can become more independent in finance, which allows them to have ability to own a house or start a family. Second, by working after school, they can decide to find a job rather than continue their studies, may progress quickly. This means that young people have chances to gain real experience and learn practical skills, which may lead to promotion and successful career.
In my opinion, it is better for students to continue their studies. From an education perspective, academic qualifications are required in many professions. This is particularly the case for those doctors, teachers, lawyers, their career must have relevant degrees. As a result, university graduates have accessed to more job opportunities, and they tend to earn good salaries than others with fewer qualifications. Furthermore, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, which leaves many people unable to find a sense of job security. Plenty of evidence suggests that youngsters who do not have qualifications from universities and colleges will not be able to compete with others.
In conclusion, for al the reasons I have mentioned above, it seems to me that students likely to be successful in career pathway if they continue their study beyond school level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n many professions. This is particularly the case for those doctors, teachers, la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17843866171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8908598717 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9875794307 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268374911289 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922309906893 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947755466337 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185708840682 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140490641116 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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