Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Leaders are the ones with qualities to influence a great mass of people.Political leaders especially are the ones who run a nation and hence the stakes and the responsibilities are very high.Their decision decides the course of the nation , one good or bad decision can influence each and every individual of the nation.I agree to some extent with the author that any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little as those decisions would be taken on a much emotional rather than logical point of view.
Firstly, a leader is chosen among a millions of people to lead a certain country or a region.He/she must be firm in the decisions that they take,they should try and cater to the likes of majority of people of the country.Shifting their decision according to public opinion would be partial to the other people of the country.For instance, In a country like India where there are people from various religious communities living together.A leader which would take a decision in favour of the Hindu community might create dissent among other communities.
Secondly,a leader must select a team of experienced professional working for his cabinet.These are the people the leader should listen to, as these people have a rich experience in handling situations more efficiently.Common people think only about their own welfare while the leader has to cater to all the people living in his country.Common consensus should be reached as close as possible as every decision does not work in favour of all individuals all the time.The leader should try and mitigate the damage as much as possible.
However, in order to make a cogent analysis of a particular topic a leader must listen to the common people and address their problem. As most of the prominent leaders are away from most of the cities and are not fully aware of the circumstances of the general public.As media can sometimes be deceptive , hence in some cases to make a much more coherent decision the leader must take into account the likes of the common people. For instance, in rural parts of India , they are various villages which are not equipped with latest technologies and in places where these technologies are present they are not maintained as much .These villages also face a paucity of water and electricity . These problems cannot be understood unless the leader himself visits the villages and talks to the people residing in them.
In conclusion, any great leader will take into account the likes of common people but will take the decision based on his/her acumen. Any leader should not be easily influenced by everything the people say, as those people are not looking at the bigger picture which the leader has to address .Although in some cases , the point of view of the general public should be considered while taking a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01666666667 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79824581037 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.774598041 60.3974514979 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.555555556 118.986275619 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.3333333333 23.4991977007 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 5.21951772744 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243202404167 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101464140891 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10872311006 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14822079078 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127299376215 0.0667264976115 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 14.1392134831 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.8420337079 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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