because the world is changing so quickly,people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In today’s progressive and enlightened world where we are living, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of happiness and sense of satisfaction human being must feel in their lives. The controversial question is whether our ancestors’ lives in the past were more delightful rather than lives in present. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I’m inclined to affirm that living in the present has abundant of facets and advantages making the present more pleasant. I feel this way for some cogent reasons, which I will explore in following essay to empower my vantage point.
First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that nowadays life is more comfortable in compare with ancient times. by the fast pace of advancement of technology, the whole world is approaching an acceptable extent of modernization and civilization. Needless to say, our ancestors had to waste a lot of energy and time to do simple tasks like going to school and fetching water. Hardships they faced in the past make their lives arduous. Only when my grandfather explained to me how much hardships they have gone through to heat their houses did I realized living in the facilitated world is a blessing. He described six-year-old boys tolerated the burden of gas capsules to pass a long way to go home. Had ancient people owned mod cons that we have today, they would have been wondered.
The other equally important reason which I like to explain lies on the reality of the more civilized nations advance, the more peaceful the world becomes. Certainly, there are evidence of increase in crimes and robberies but right now I’m talking about major wars and battles. Despite what the future holds for us on the possibility of nuclear war and complete obliteration, we have to admit that people at present have not faced hardships of world wars and ruthless combats between countries for a long period of time. In today’s world, we don’t live in the fear of being conquered or sudden pillage from bandit groups since law powerfully monitors and controls all of individuals acts and provide us a world away from chaos. Additionally, people of today are much more cultured and have more social empathy and harmony. In other words, humanity holds higher place in the present world.
To sum up, this conclusion can be drawn that today’s life isn’t comparable with ancient lives, by contemplating all mentioned reasons above, one can soon realize that people of today are no less happy or satisfied than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...fortable in compare with ancient times. by the fast pace of advancement of technol...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...when my grandfather explained to me how much hardships they have gone through to hea...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ss combats between countries for a long period of time. In today’s world, we don’t live in the...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s happy or satisfied than in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, i feel, talking about, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99540229885 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73892972318 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604597701149 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4407907714 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.722222222 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222048423956 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592241266823 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541993673925 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132737004695 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420735301799 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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